Daveman2's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[End of Dayz]

Very Nice

Damn with some more production this track could sound like Freakin' Studio Quality, nice beat/lyrics, very well done man. Very pro, damn the "How could we be so blind" part is badass. just well done not much else to say, lyrics are a little basic, but that sounds like your style, not really bad. Damn i love part of the beat where it sounds like a crowd cheering "Ha" or somthing. Badass, very original. I save my 10s for life-changers, i'd give this a 9.5 if i could

illumatiks responds:

haha thanx, the part where it 'sounded like the crowd cheerin ''ha''' was a clap snare with double reverb

[Reppin' Tha OC]

Uh Copyright

Dude if it's on here, it's not really copyrighted. All submissions here are for the purpose of royalty-free and free for use by the Flash Artists.
Ok Song:
Beat needs alot of work, vocal harmonies & singing needs some work.

Is this humorous? Cuz the lyrics kinda are,
and I dont think u can copyright something where you say you're a Juggalo, cuz that's definitely a copyrighted.

The lyrics & Message of the song are really lame. Your rapping isn't to bad, but the beat sounds really cheap, and needs some work. The intro soundws cool but just like some Eminem Song I heard

So basically:Practice singing, work on the beats, and get some original decent lyrics. The core Rapping isnt too bad though.

LiveLoveDieCT responds:

the lyrics are supposed to be lame. this song is making fun of all that is gangsta rap. i dont really ever write serious songs. the singing is supposed to be somewhat lame and overdone kinda like a nate dogg or someone. thanks for the constuctive criticism though.

[Random and Uncalled 4]

Good Promise

It has good promise, but it's kinda mixed up, and doesnt flow too well, some parts of it are really nice sounding, but it's just all kinda jumbled and doesn't fit well. Well mixed/recorded except I'd reccomend some light reverb on the drums to make them sound more real to life. It could be awesome if you worked with it to make it flow and cleaner

Iamtheclock responds:

Thanks. I'll have to remember that the next time I make a song like this.

[BatlooP]

Not too bad

the beginnig part is annoying; I started out disliking it, but it grew on me, and after the second part I kinda got into it, very odd but likeable beat, could work for some creepy flash animations.

StealthNice responds:

thanks man... i do think i took a bit long on the intro... sorry.. Glad you ended up liking it tho :)